tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-514699531408935998.post4766035935037992835..comments2023-10-04T04:48:32.130-04:00Comments on Faint Heart Art: Polish Woman Sketch and Miss M's ArtVicki Holdwickhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05080822190815460018noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-514699531408935998.post-2900831667583835322011-12-15T23:27:28.287-05:002011-12-15T23:27:28.287-05:00This is a great sketch. When I look at it, I see ...This is a great sketch. When I look at it, I see a lot of character in her face. I think I would like to see more detail and shading in the face (especially the forehead)...like deepening those hard-earned wrinkles. I think that would really bring out her character. Keep at it!<br />Cindy K.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-514699531408935998.post-82394476629973071792011-12-15T08:09:05.878-05:002011-12-15T08:09:05.878-05:00You did a wonderful job with this, and all your dr...You did a wonderful job with this, and all your drawing has certainly paid off. You just keep getting better and better! Little Miss M is clearly pleased with what she is doing, and her self-portrait is very well done and sweet! hugs, nancynanke's stuffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11597989427187199295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-514699531408935998.post-22699299695563641542011-12-15T05:44:19.919-05:002011-12-15T05:44:19.919-05:00I really think you have captured the essence of th...I really think you have captured the essence of this lady. I am no expert, but maybe a splash of colour might just be the magic you are looking for...when I say splash, that could something very subtle :)<br />xxGwenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04023473462815457423noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-514699531408935998.post-3013842907944753742011-12-14T13:06:26.032-05:002011-12-14T13:06:26.032-05:00Both the Polish woman and Miss M are very charming...Both the Polish woman and Miss M are very charming. I think a little more shading to round the cheeks and put some shadows into the neck are just what's needed. I love the bright eyes.Barbara Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04054152020573645118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-514699531408935998.post-61182151839134694012011-12-14T11:23:07.199-05:002011-12-14T11:23:07.199-05:00This is one of your best sketches. I would just a...This is one of your best sketches. I would just add some shading to the neck and ear area. Keep improving JanAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-514699531408935998.post-69164335767756451892011-12-14T10:17:54.267-05:002011-12-14T10:17:54.267-05:00I think you did a great job on the picture of the ...I think you did a great job on the picture of the Polish woman. I looked at that site yesterday and immediately recognized the subject. Miss M's self portrait is very nice too!Karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11852732874371893782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-514699531408935998.post-56120032600232334512011-12-14T09:06:04.771-05:002011-12-14T09:06:04.771-05:00I love feedback too, but am not always comfortable...I love feedback too, but am not always comfortable giving it because - what do I know! I might suggest to lighten her iris a little and add in some shading to show those beautiful apple cheeks in the photo. I enjoy looking at all your great work, keep it coming.Patsy Taylor-Crawhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05049469688308325036noreply@blogger.com