Miss M at first thought the woman in the photo was a little angry, but then when I told her that this woman was beautiful and was smiling in greeting, she agreed that she was beautiful. She then said, "Her hair is beautiful, Nana. It's gray, but beautiful!" I had to agree with her. This is a face full of character and a certain charm. I'm not sure I captured that, but if you go to the original photo using the link above, I think you will be charmed as well.
Meanwhile, Miss M sat next to my computer sketching in her journal and made a self portrait while I was working. Here she is at work:
And here is her self portrait. Notice the ponytail off to the side. That is how I did her hair that morning.
Well, I am expecting Miss M again this morning. In fact, she will be here some time in the next half hour. I'm on my first mug of coffee and she and I will undoubtedly do some art, work some puzzles, and maybe snuggle together and watch a movie. I will take her to school around noon.
I hope to get a bit of time to do some art today and am hoping the same for you.
xoxo
I love feedback too, but am not always comfortable giving it because - what do I know! I might suggest to lighten her iris a little and add in some shading to show those beautiful apple cheeks in the photo. I enjoy looking at all your great work, keep it coming.
ReplyDeleteI think you did a great job on the picture of the Polish woman. I looked at that site yesterday and immediately recognized the subject. Miss M's self portrait is very nice too!
ReplyDeleteThis is one of your best sketches. I would just add some shading to the neck and ear area. Keep improving Jan
ReplyDeleteBoth the Polish woman and Miss M are very charming. I think a little more shading to round the cheeks and put some shadows into the neck are just what's needed. I love the bright eyes.
ReplyDeleteI really think you have captured the essence of this lady. I am no expert, but maybe a splash of colour might just be the magic you are looking for...when I say splash, that could something very subtle :)
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You did a wonderful job with this, and all your drawing has certainly paid off. You just keep getting better and better! Little Miss M is clearly pleased with what she is doing, and her self-portrait is very well done and sweet! hugs, nancy
ReplyDeleteThis is a great sketch. When I look at it, I see a lot of character in her face. I think I would like to see more detail and shading in the face (especially the forehead)...like deepening those hard-earned wrinkles. I think that would really bring out her character. Keep at it!
ReplyDeleteCindy K.